Hier Anregungen für Teil 2:
After these days I drive > ... I drove
with my coffee backpackers, to Broken Bay. > with the backpackers from the coffee to B. B.
I had wonderful 14 days. > I had 14 wonderful days.
... to ride the waves and explore > ... to ride the waves and to explore
Do you know? > Can you imagine?
... that I find no connection... > ... that I would not find any connection ...
... all these people are so nice, helpful > ... all these people would be so nice, helpful ...
One evening on a Barbie, which named > ..., which is a ...
a barbecue party where everyone brings something eat and drink with itself > ... brings his own food and drinks
So it happened, I drove at the 14 weekday from Broken Bay in an old caravan departed to Barrington Tops National Park. > So it happened. At the fourteenth day (of my stay) I drove with an old caravan form B.B. to B.T. National Park.
Luckily I bought in Sydney at a garage-sail, it is called the day where the residents in their garages selling prices items they no longer need for a small price, a tent which was very useful in these days. > (Anm.: Den Satz vereinfachen, bzw. aufteilen auf zwei Sätze!!)
Luckily for me I bought in Sydney a tent which was very useful in these days on the occasion of a garage-sail (Anm.: heißt das tatsächlich so? Oder: garage-sell ?). This is the day were the residents are selling items which they no longer need in their garages at a small price.
But the question was how should I came out of here, > ... how to get out of here because ...
Fortunately for me, a family with two children just grabbed (??) > ... with to children was about to leave and ...
Ciao, Tamy.
